Man, Steve tore through the manuscript and really punched it up, based on a year of play. And I got pages of great notes from people who have played and found the book confusing in spots, or hard to parse, or had questions unanswered by the text. So I’m weeding it and adding stuff based on Steve’s really hard edit and it is looking great. I cannot wait to hand it over to Patrick, who is going to lay it out again in a more sensible way. It’s going to be easier to read and play.
One super interesting trend – 80-90% of the procedural confusion stems from things that are directly addressed in sidebars. This means that people don’t read them. Which means they are going away.