The Shab-al-Hiri Roach text has been expanded a bit, padded out with little “nota bene” hints and tips. It turns out many of these were already embedded in the text, so teasing them out really helps the tone. One thing to do as we get to copy editing is physically sort all the sections in chapters three and four and make sure they are in the correct order – there seems to be some dissonance, and we need to make absolutely certain the text is clear and well-ordered. An extended play example still needs to be written as well. But we’re getting there!
Crawling Toward Publication