Chapters 3, 4, and 5 of the Shab-al-Hiri Roach have been edited. Once the copy editing was complete (two passes by two different people), Jason took the whole shebang and physically cut it into chunks. It was then pretty easy to see dependencies and areas where the logical flow of the text was screwed up, and put it back together. Of course having an editor on hand helps.

Editing, Editing